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Olivia Johnson's avatar

Gorgeous riding Kate, yes we definitely need those places that bring us back to our center and wash our mind from the conditioning. The world will try to pull itself over your eyes and we have to clean our consciousness frequently. You can feel the residence in your words thank you for sharing. ā¤ļø

Kate Smedley's avatar

Thanks so much Olivia, since I wrote this I feel like I’m coming back to myself again, slowly. šŸ’™

Olivia Johnson's avatar

Wandering in the right places then transforming through writing can do that Kate šŸ¤ so happy to hear that!

Nikki Meyler Miller's avatar

Wow! This is so beautiful. I just love this part, especially -

As the waves breathe

a quiet exhale,

I remember again to untether

unwanted emotion.

And I entrust my soul to

that which I cannot see,

an inescapable love

my deepest failings

cannot sever.

Thank you, Kate. Hugs, peace, and love to you.

Kate Smedley's avatar

Thank you Nikki, hugs, peace and love back to you.

VJ's avatar

Love this, Kate. Especially these lines:

ā€œwhere time’s linearity dissolves, absorbing boundaries that were never ours to create.ā€

There’s an expansive beauty in the way you captured that feeling… the kind of writing that pulls us out of ourselves for a moment… thanks for sharing.

Kate Smedley's avatar

Thank you VJ, I come back to this place every year and always feel it pulling me out of myself, I'm grateful that spoke to you.

Suzanne as Pilgrimdoodles's avatar

Absolutely beautiful, I love the descriptive words you have chosen in capturing the essence of a sanctuary for you ā¤ļø.

Kate Smedley's avatar

Thanks Suzanne, it is a sanctuary, that's for sure, very grateful to have the time here. ā¤ļø

G and T: The Journey's avatar

The sea has a way of calling parts of us back together again doesn’t it. Really beautiful writing 🌹

Kate Smedley's avatar

Thanks George, it is slowly calling me back to myself šŸŒ»šŸ™

Nathalie Cohen's avatar

Absolutely beautiful, Kate. Reading it felt like a slow exhale and a reminder that there’s an infinite amount of love and hope underneath all our (inner) noise. Just the reminder I needed today, immersed in the ā€˜cultural trance that enslaves us without awareness’. Thanks for sharing some of that special place here.

Kate Smedley's avatar

Thank you Nathalie, it is definitely our inner noise that gets in the way - or mine for sure. The words I write are always a reminder for me too, especially the sense of a cultural trance that we all seem to be increasingly caught up in.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

What stayed with me most was the feeling of returning rather than escaping. The poem does not seek transcendence away from the body or the world, but a quieter realignment within them.

ā€œAs the waves breathe / a quiet exhale, / I remember again to untetherā€¦ā€

There is something deeply restorative in that movement. Like the landscape is not healing the speaker from outside, but gently helping them remember what was already waiting underneath the noise.

Kate Smedley's avatar

Thank you, that's exactly how it felt, thank you sharing too.